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Creative Poetry
Add on your own lines to keep the poem going......
In days of old
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
In days of old
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
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In days of old
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
Outside the glow of campfire light
The howl of Wolves would split the night
And make the blood run cold!
Up the men jumped,
their hearts a-thump - to defend the sheepsies in the fold .
Because there in the wings
Where the Angels dare not sing
was poor Jayway doubled up with the Farts!
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
Outside the glow of campfire light
The howl of Wolves would split the night
And make the blood run cold!
Up the men jumped,
their hearts a-thump - to defend the sheepsies in the fold .
Because there in the wings
Where the Angels dare not sing
was poor Jayway doubled up with the Farts!
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WHOA! I think Jojo is taking literary licence with the lyrical pentambic hyperboly penambulator rhyming or summen like that Jayway and the Farts don't rhyme - that just adds a warm humanistic glow to the poem......
In days of old
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
Outside the glow of campfire light
The howl of Wolves would split the night
And make the blood run cold!
Up the men jumped,
their hearts a-thump - to defend the sheepsies in the fold .
Because there in the wings
Where the Angels dare not sing
Are wounded warriors missing
Preparing to battle
Against unreasonable prattle
To save seductive virgins virtue......(I'm leaving Jayways farts 'til the end)...........
was poor Jayway doubled up with the Farts!
In days of old
When men were bold
And women listened to the stories told............
Outside the glow of campfire light
The howl of Wolves would split the night
And make the blood run cold!
Up the men jumped,
their hearts a-thump - to defend the sheepsies in the fold .
Because there in the wings
Where the Angels dare not sing
Are wounded warriors missing
Preparing to battle
Against unreasonable prattle
To save seductive virgins virtue......(I'm leaving Jayways farts 'til the end)...........
was poor Jayway doubled up with the Farts!
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Re: HUH !
I didn't decide until the last minute the identity of the 'Phantom Farter' but your name just tripped off the tongue when typing!Jayway wrote:The RUDENESS of prattle , will lead to more battle , JOJO I am gonna hurt you
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